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    作者：絮语情话
     
     
    窗外是海
    舱内是海
    我是一条船
    沉入大海
     
    身外是海
    海在腹内
    我是一张纸
    沉入大海
     
    我背对大海
    你面朝大海
    我是一封情书
    沉入大海
     
    海滩上的女孩
    顺风的沙裙
    挥一挥手
    我沉入大海。
     
     
     
    9/6/2006 2:37 PM | Blog it

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    峰峰 丁wrote:
    简单的文字
    清清的思念
    美丽的画面
    我看的见
     
    Feb. 26
    Jing Jingwrote:
    好久没来了
    Nov. 28
    泣血wrote:
    手心是海 手背是海 你是一条纹理 诉说着海
    思念是海 回忆是海 你是一个片断 珍藏着海
    我游进大海 你离开大海 爱是一个潮水 流入大海
    岩石上的男孩 随风的发线 叹了叹气    你忘记大海
     
    Sept. 10
    草包大侠wrote:
    我读两遍,
    好空灵.好像我在海中央,
    我再读读.
    Sept. 10
    紫罗忠 Logoswrote:
    hai hao
    Sept. 10
    -wrote:
    我觉得好空~/个性不强/`
    也许是我不理解你的真正意思吧/`
    Sept. 10
    若 羽wrote:
    有些意思,剪爱,就让它随风吹向大海。有点小缺憾,不够严整精致,比如第一段个人感觉有些多余.意下如何?
    Sept. 10
    梦飞wrote:
    我反对,没我好
    Sept. 9
    Laojia Blackwrote:
    挖喔....文学家
    Sept. 8
    紫色的沙地wrote:
    好美`
    Sept. 8

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